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The Open Sky by ~xxannaxx:iconxxannaxx:





The Open Sky


You ripple, you oscillate; you wave,
And crash into my body only to be expelled through my heart like bats fleeing from a cave.
You hold on tight, you give; and you take away,
Amidst the covert transition from night to day.
You are so beautiful that looking at you consumes my mind
with anxiety and strange relief,
The butterflies inside my brain perch quietly only when I am not looking at you in disbelief.
Sometimes I look upon you and wonder if heaven is on Earth; you are my window into the vast unknown,
Only you can bring me solace when you are overcast and you are a daily reminder that I am not alone.
You are the sky, you are the celestial getaway for the mind; you are the center of my life,
You are the moody, whimsical husband and I am the devoted, loving wife.
Because of you the world is alive; every afternoon I worship the color of your skin,
Dark blue above me and deep, deep orange and pink on the horizon.
The sun and the clouds come to together to pay homage and refract sweet light,
After the rain has fallen and the weary clouds go about their business, the setting sun is the most beautiful sight.
When you are black, you are fine--the stars twinkle when they weep,
And when you are blue, you are such a calming force--the butterflies in my head go right to sleep.
When you are sad, the sun loses the will to shine as grey clouds gather and consume,
Ice cold tears fall one after the other and in the distance lightning and silent flashes ominously loom.
When you are hurt, your blood flows thick and quickly across your pink and purple flesh; the sky seems like it is on fire,
And I love it when you are hurting--I want to see the flames go higher and higher.
You are the often ignored beauty; not enough people look up to see what I see,
You are magnificent, beautiful, and strange..you are just like me...

Sushanna
©2003-2009 ~xxannaxx
:iconxxannaxx:

Author's Comments

This is part of a collaborative effort between *foureyes and myself. We are lovers of the sky and we thought that it would be nice to come together and work on a project aimed at honoring the sky we love.

So above, you will see a beautiful photo taken by *foureyes himself and below, you will find a poem that I have written especially for this occasion.

Enjoy and please take the time to look up once and awhile. The sky is a strange and wonderful phenomenon. :)

:+fav: a collaborative effort between foureyes and xxannaxx :+fav:

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:iconsilentregrets:
Ohhh wow I love this! I love the descriptions!

I love the sky, too. It's an amazing thing. Makes me feel so small.
:iconfoureyes:
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you are Amazing,....your words fill my heart :heart:
they have more beauty than a thousnd photos !!!
:+favlove::+fav::+favlove:
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:icondoriano:
I faved his and therefore I :+fav: yours.
And I hate repeating myself so what am I going to write here?!

Hope the skies will always be there for you.

(oh ...just read what I wrote to Bernie's pic).
:iconsumajarong:
WOWWWW!!! For both of you..the photo is great, and a perfect illustration of a truly incredible piece of poetry. Now, go write something to go with one of MY photos! :+fav:
:icondeathsdream:
Your words are like sweet necter, exploding from a hummingbirds wings. I Love the Collab, both of these go together so well... either one would be wonderful on it's own!
:iconarwenita:
^^ You should really have incluided link to this one in *foureyes deviation... this one deserves at least 50% of those favs ^^

Beautiful words ^^ with such a beautiful artwork to company ^^

:clap: to team work :)

glad the *foureyes introduced u to us ^^
:iconskitzokitten420:
i love you poem nd i totally agree i spend so many nights just tryign to figure out the sky even thought i know i never will its bueaty goes so deep its impossible but your poem really hits that one a deeper note keep up the good work
:iconnelsmiley:
very beatiful...words and picture

:+fav:

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